This is nice
The sketch of the samurai is nicely done.
I don't like the lettering though. It gives it an unfinished feel. Maybe if the characters were filled in with colour or had either an aura or fire emanating from them.
I know it's hard to do in pencil and that colouring might offset the main subject but something like:
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